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[''Match is getting Eraser a back rub with her feet.''<ref>{{ori|There was a much different plot that I can not explain.}}</ref>]
 
[''Match is getting Eraser a back rub with her feet.''<ref>{{ori|There was a much different plot that I can not explain.}}</ref>]
 
{{Scene|Night|Even though it took Pen a few hours to contact nearly everybody on Earth<ref>I used to think that certain people in the object universe had the ability to contact everyone and have them gathered. I also used to think there was a French narrator voice (like the one on SpongeBob) who narrated the new episodes of the series.</ref>, the majority of them managed to show up.}}
 
{{Scene|Night|Even though it took Pen a few hours to contact nearly everybody on Earth<ref>I used to think that certain people in the object universe had the ability to contact everyone and have them gathered. I also used to think there was a French narrator voice (like the one on SpongeBob) who narrated the new episodes of the series.</ref>, the majority of them managed to show up.}}
 
<!-- Note from original script: So this is a continuation of the announcement scene. I am using the font “Bradley” because it is the nomen secundum of Pen's VA. -->
 
*{{d|p}}: [''backstage''] In three, two, one, nought!<ref>{{ori|Pencil did not include 0 when she was counting.}}</ref>
 
[''The lights go on. Pen goes on stage with much applause.'']
 
*{{d|d}}: Hi, everyone. First of all, I'd like to thank you for leaving your present posts and coming here for this really important Million Masses<ref>The collective term for the objects from Goiky had been the '''Million Masses'''. In the yterbite era it was just being an object, akin to being human on Earth.</ref> gathering.<ref>{{ori|I did not include the acknowledgements in the original.}}</ref> I have invited you all here to join forces together against a common enemy.
 
*{{d|ru}}: Who? Flower?
 
*{{d|d}}: No, she's dead.
 
*{{d|ru}}: Then who?
 
*{{d|d}}: We need to show the morally incorrect Golf Ball that we are able to get rid of Leafy!
 
*{{d|pin}}: You mean that ironically evil monster who stole Dream Island?
 
*{{d|m}}: Yeah, ''that'' Leafy.
 
*{{d|pin}}: What I think, is that we start a vengeance alliance! Say "aye" if you're with me!
 
*'''Everyone''': Aye!
 
*{{d|p}}: <small>Looks like we've got a spirit demonstrator.</small> I have ne'er been any more proud!
 
*{{d|ru}}: I should demonstrate to my mob buddies the summoning incantation!
 
*{{d|d}}: Woah woah woah, hold on. First we'll need to definitely make our own Dream Island since the other one was stolen.
 
*{{d|pin}}: And we need a place to stay. I can't catch up on the action all of the way from Vietnam.<ref>{{ori|Teardrop was the one to give the suggestion, but she can't talk.}}</ref>
 
*{{d|ic}}: Why not the [[B-Quadna Hotel]]?<ref>This was the original name for it, and I don't know why.</ref>
 
*{{d|geltercube}}: As manager of the Hotel and father of the one who suggested it, I shall open it to anyone who does not like Leafy!
 
*'''Everyone''': Yeah!
 
*{{d|d}}: Good night, people. [''drops the microphone'']<ref>Just an additional tidbit I added.</ref>
 
{{Scene|Near Estigua's house|Pencil is leading many people who are carrying the Dream Island, the next day.}}
 
*{{d|p}}: Left! Left! Left! Wait, yer good.
 
*{{d|ru}}: [''driving a gigantic truck carrying the walls of Dream Island''] This is fine? It's carrying about a centimetre from your house.
 
*{{d|d}}: Before I ask what the hell that giant murder machine is, why is Ruby driving a truck if illegally she can't?
 
*{{d|p}}: I wouldn' ask thet …
 
{{Scene|The next day<ref>{{ori|As the original fanfic took place throughout six months, this day would be Valentine's Day, Pencil's birthday.}}</ref>|Pen gives his gift to Pencil.}}
 
*{{d|p}}: Wot's this fer?
 
*{{d|d}}: Just because you've been such a wonderful wife to me and the best parent to my children.<ref>This was obviously added in later.</ref>
 
*{{d|p}}: Awwwwww! [''she opens her gift''] A personal recovery centre?
 
*{{d|d}}: Exactly like the one on the set of BFDI.
 
*{{d|p}}: Oh, yer so nice! [''they kiss''] 'Ow I wish the kids were 'ere to see this.
 
[''Pencil Jr peers out of the closet.'']
 
*{{d|pj}}: We are here!
 
*{{d|p}}: Oh … Saye! Wot brought y' 'ere?
 
*{{d|pj}}: We all came!
 
[''The kids appear out of the drawers.'']
 
*{{d|dj}}: We come here most of the time.
 
*{{d|cit}}: When we're scared!
 
*{{d|xim}}: For some of us, that's like every night.
 
*{{d|sal}}: Don't worry, we didn't miss a thing.
 
*{{d|p}}: Oh, 'ow wonderful … But kids, we've got our very first personal Schreiber family recovery centre!
 
*{{d|zor}}: Cool! I'll just revive the worst dictators of the last regeneration and—
 
*{{d|p}}: 'Old on, Ora, {{Acc|l'ui've|we have}} better priorities to revive—
 
*{{d|d}}: —that does not involve the reincarnation of Goiky's worst.
 
*{{d|p}}: B-U-B-B-L-E. Bubble!
 
[''She cranks it.<ref>{{ori|After typing the name, one would normally wait and the recoveree would appear. That format changed shortly after BFDIA 4.}}</ref> Bubble appears. She has been dead since Flower killed her.'']
 
*{{d|bu}}: Hoiy guys! What did I miss?
 
*{{d|p}}: Nobody truly won BFDI.
 
*{{d|d}}: We got married!
 
*{{d|yar}}: And therefore we happened!
 
*{{d|bu}}: Wow, mini versions of you guys! But what's with the croiwd of poiple outsoide? Environmental protesters or oingry mob?
 
*{{d|p}}: The second one. But before y'does anythin', we're a part of'e.
 
*{{d|bu}}: Who killed who?
 
*{{d|p}}: Leafy.
 
*{{d|d}}: She stole Dream Island and we're out to take her down.
 
*{{d|bu}}: Unfoirtunately, Oi'm not joining you guys; hoite to be disloyal, but I'd rather be in that hoilpless stoite of Afterloife than foight against my friend. [''she pops herself'']
 
*{{d|dj}}: What was that about?
 
*{{d|jav}}: I don't know, but I like her style.
 
*{{d|pj}}: And I actually got to meet Bubble from BFDI! [''squees'']
 
{{scene|Eventually<ref>{{ori|The date was set at May, but if that were the case here, it would interfere with the schedule.}}</ref>, Match got a terrible illness, and she had to stay in hospital.}}
 
*{{d|m}}: Omg, will I be, like, okay?
 
*{{d|tt}}: Oh, I don't know. You have got a bad case of problemaphotismophlogitis!
 
*{{d|m}}: And how long exactly will it take to relieve?
 
*{{d|tt}}: Two and a half months, exactly.
 
*{{d|m}}: But I cannot wait that time! I have to catch that criminal who stole Dream Island, and all my friends are, like, going to need me there!
 
{{Scene|Planning the chase|Pencil assigns roles.}}
 
*{{d|p}}: Okay, so now I shall be h'assignin' jobs. 'O wants to be leader? [''everyone does something to make Pencil notice them''<ref>{{ori|Everyone raised their hands. Obviously this is problematic for some.}}</ref> An' since Pin raised 'er 'and, like, 17 milliseconds before I e'en asked the question, she gets to lead our alliance.
 
*{{d|ruby}}: You mean our ''mob!''
 
*{{d|book}}: Yes, we are mobsters now!
 
*'''All''': Yeah!
 
*{{d|glisteria}}: Wait, we can not be a mobster group!
 
*{{d|alphorn}}: Why not?
 
*{{d|glisteria}}: A mobster is a member of a group of violent criminals.
 
*{{d|z}}: Works for me.
 
*{{d|e}}: And me!
 
*{{d|p}}: An' jus' 'ow many violent criminals are 'ere in this audience?
 
*{{d|d}}: Not very much, heh… So how much in this world, people?
 
*{{d|p}}: Thet's like 1.3% o' the population! An' they, like Leafy, steal.
 
*{{d|suzette}}: O, the irony.
 
*{{d|usb}}: Hey, Thudhette, wanna be bethd buddieth?
 
*{{d|p}}: Oi, silent back there!
 
*{{d|usb}}: Thorry, Penthil Threiber!
 
*{{d|p}}: Anyways, ye 13,000 criminals' job's to steel the original island back from Leafy!
 
*{{d|z}}: I love stealing! [''the rest of the criminals cheer rambunctiously'']
 
*{{d|p}}: An', er, thet Spongy an' the Defence Forces o' Suriname, Tonga an' Iceland<ref>Quite ironic, Iceland has no military.</ref> mus' jump onto Leafy and/or Firey should they actually come or attack us!
 
*{{d|coiny}}: Can I join them too?
 
*{{d|usd}}: I'm for him joining.
 
*{{d|n}}: Ooh, me too!
 
*{{d|p}}: Sure.
 
*{{d|spongy}}: Ooooooh, iiiin theeee prooooceeeess oooof juuumpiiiing, caaaan weeee geeeet paaaaraaaachuuuutes? Aaaand iiiif theeyy aaaare uuuused, caaaan Iiii uuuuse theeee piiiink oooones?
 
*{{d|p}}: Well, Pen, wot d'ye says about allowin' parachutes.
 
*{{d|d}}: No, absolutely not. I don't want a death for all of you– we're allies.
 
*{{d|ruby}}: That means '''''MOB BUDDIES!'''''
 
*{{d|spongy}}: Soooo noooo paaaaraaaachuuuutes?
 
*{{d|p}}: No, Spongy. An' even if I did let'ee use 'em, I'd never trust'ee.
 
*{{d|spongy}}: Whaaaat, neeeeveeeer?
 
*{{d|p}}: No, never!
 
*{{d|z}}: Well, I wouldn't care if a three year old sponge got arrested!
 
*{{d|amyloplast}}: Shouldn't Leafy just get arrested?
 
*{{d|cad}}: Technically, Firey should be arrested—
 
*{{d|usd}}: And Leafy should be lynched! [''awkward silence''] Too soon?
 
*{{d|coiny}}: I feel like I should disagree with this, considering the protagonist of BFDI being someone chased.
 
*{{d|n}}: Coiny, have you been drinking? Leafy is bad.
 
*{{d|sb}}: With a double-storied A.
 
*{{d|cal}}: [''singing''] This little light of mine, I'm gonna let it shine!
 
*'''Chorus''': This little light of mine, I'm gonna let it shine …
 
{{Scene|Golf Ball's little mob|Somewhere different from the Grand Alliance– the mob of GB is less popular, consisting of her, Tennis Ball, and for some reason, Teardrop.}}
 
*{{d|gb}}: Let me assign jobs.
 
*{{d|tb}}: May I?
 
*{{d|gb}}: '''''NO!''''' I am going to lead. Tennis Ball, you are on watch if any enemies show up. And Teardrop, attack them, at once.
 
*{{d|tb}}: Teardrop has just reverted to her six year old form, I really don't think she—
 
*{{d|gb}}: Yes! Tennis Ball, your complaints give me rashes not even science can explain.
 
{{Scene|With Pencil's group}}
 
*{{d|p}}: Finally … Match … is missin'.
 
*{{d|kat}}: No, she's at the Daniel Arap Moi Hospital– Eraser, you could have worked there if you stayed.
 
*{{d|e}}: Don't start, mother.
 
 
 
==Trivia==
 
==Trivia==
 
*This episode actually was made on 31 January 2013, almost ''<s>two</s> three years'' before it was posted on the Wiki. It was also made on a separate file on ''Pages'' when [[Pencil vs Batman]] was still in construction.
 
*This episode actually was made on 31 January 2013, almost ''<s>two</s> three years'' before it was posted on the Wiki. It was also made on a separate file on ''Pages'' when [[Pencil vs Batman]] was still in construction.
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